Ginny wrote a song!

OKay, so I wrote a song from Mrs. Crouch's POV, and I wanted you guy's opinions (of COURSE). The tune kind of makes the song, and you cant hear that , but here are the lyrics. Tell me what you think! (Don't be afraid to be brutal.) Also, it still needs a title, so if you've got a suggestion, it would be appreciated.


There is none but night
Here there is no light
Only the comfort of mind
The battle is done
Let morning come
There is nothing more for me to do, my son
I've taken your place
In this cold, heartless grave
I've gaurded your soul with my life
It's a mother's duty
To protect innocence
Though you're no longer innocent my son
So hide away in your father's home
Live your life, for now it's also mine
This is the end, for now I must wait
I'll wait until the morning calls me home
I'll wait until the morning calls me home
You have taken lives
You take one more
It's fine, it's given with open hands
You are all I have
And all I want
So go now, and live your life, my son
I'll lay down here in this cold, hard cell
For my battle is fought and I won
Death shakes my hand
For I've given him my life
Now I'll sleep until the morning calls me home
The morning calls me home (x3)
Now call me home
The morning calls me home (x3)
Now call me home